What can I say that’s not yet been said?
When I can’t seem to get you
Out of my head
You’re amazing
But that hardly describes it
You’re beautiful
But there’s so much more to it
You’re marvelous, wonderful, and incredible
You’re funny, smart, but also unforgettable
What can I say that’s not yet been said?
When I can’t seem to get you
Out of my head
You’re only everything to me
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17 comments:
a piece of gd-feeling poem..n the picture u chosed suits juz fine..wish i was in the picture lookin at the sunset listenin to the crashin wave breathin in the sea...
keep on writing!
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wow...i love it..its really nice...u write very well !!
Twilight is the best time of day, especially near the ocean. "What can I say that hasn't been said before?"
Great poem. <3
You always write the prettiest things.
The picture is amazing!!! Did you take it???
-Amy
<3
Awh that was a cute poem. You always write pretty things (:
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Oh...beautiful! beautiful...girl you really can writ...I love this piece!
nice, nice... your words flow just right
Profoundly moving. This is just the sort of poem you deserve. You are very kind at heart! See you soon
very nice.
thanks for the comments too:)
sooo cute, plus totally true i cant even begin to descibe how much that applys to me lol :) cute picture by the way its really pretty!!!
Love the picture. Love the poem more.
Very nice, speaks so universally about so many things, relationships, addictions, but yet so personal to yourself.
Very Cool
Hey! where have u dissapered ?!
wow, that picture is amazing! keep posting :)
When mere words just can't seem to say how you feel about someone....write anyway! I now exactly what you are saying in here and you say it well. The refrain line is wonderful! My only suggestion....would be to replace the word " only" in the last line. For me, only and everything contradict each other, unless of cos that was your intent.....how bout: "simply"?
You are simply everything to me!
Still, this is a touching poem.
And your picture is stunning....did you take that?
Oh ... wow. This is beautiful. I just started reading so I don't know if I should know who this is to but I love it.
Definitely going to keep reading.
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